I taught speech and rhetoric for decades at the college level and so, of course, I watched the debate between Biden and Trump.
The debate was to help people understand the candidates’ positions so they could assess who might be the better president. Yet, what is frightening is that after the broadcast the discussion wasn’t about what was said, but rather about Biden’s performance and age. This is now the narrative. Forget Trump.
Granted, confidence, body language and voice, the performance aspects of speech, are important. They enhance persuasion. But a good speech must also be judged by its content.
Yes … Biden was lackluster, neither confident nor energetic. His performance was poor. But his arguments were solid. Unlike Trump, he answered the questions he was asked. He had done the research. He made sense. He knew what he was talking about. Trump repeatedly lied and repeated one major disturbing message regardless of what he was asked. Inexplicably, the postdebate narrative focused exclusively on Biden’s age and performance. And it continues to do so.
Why aren’t we focused on Biden’s arguments in comparison to Trump’s?
When I was teaching speech, sometimes students who were unprepared but confident and funny egoists came to class and bulldozed their way through their speeches. They were engaging and entertaining, yes, but what they said was absolute garbage.
If you were the teacher, would you give an “A” to these clowns who did nothing and just winged the assignment?
The students who were evaluating these jokers often gave them high marks — form over substance.
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The hardest thing I did was getting my students to listen to arguments and assess speeches critically, rather than be fooled by the animated actor who spoke a lot and said nothing. Too often my students were taken in.
They enjoyed the loud voice, the wild gestures, the facial expressions, the acting, the confidence. They were entertained. They couldn’t assess the speaker’s arguments because they weren’t listening.
I warned them that being taken in by smooth talkers is how fraud is committed and how too many people are easily duped. To avoid falling prey to fraud you must listen and evaluate what is being said. Does the argument make sense or not?
This is even more important when choosing government officials.
The people who should know better, the news analysts and political commentators, are not listening. Like my students, they missed the point.
There is a lot to criticize in Biden’s performance. But it should be the arguments that ultimately win the debate. Biden did the research and knew what he was talking about. He answered the questions.
Unfortunately, these pundits have set the public discourse, moving it away from the rambling incoherent Trump to Biden’s age. Why aren’t we talking about the fast-talker, who stayed on a fraudulent message regardless of the question, who refused to say he would concede the election if he lost, and who promoted fear — of immigrants, the economy, war and violence by using unsubstantiated fabrications? Why is the conversation now on getting rid of an elderly statesman rather than fighting for democracy against demagoguery?
Dr. Marla Lowenthal is retired faculty at the University of San Francisco, Department of Rhetoric and Language.
Ms. Lowenthal, are you going to ghost the on spot comments by Terrence, Dirk, Steve, Law and Order, and MichKosk or are you the typical democrat who visits the Democrat Fantasy Land and then ghosts the individuals who provide facts that counter your wishful thinking? And please tell me why a Jewish woman would support an anti-semite President Biden and not President Trump who recognized Jerusalem as the capital of Israel?
Agreed Dr. Lowenthal. There is no doubt Biden did a cringe worthy job at the the debate and the righties will have a field day pointing out all the errors. The irony is they will point out the lies of Biden while not mentioning the 30+ lies by Trump.
Based on substance, which should be the main focus of voting, Trump failed and was equally cringe worthy. Based on his hysteria, all ills are coming from the border and America is is the toilet. Listening to him berate our country based on his lies was maddening.
If he were to try for employment in any decent job in America, he would be declined outright based on his criminal record. Why then, should he be considered for the most important job in the land? I will take an old man over a conman any day.
I mentioned Trump's exaggerations and false content in my post. You are well aware that I have referred to Trump as a compulsive liar many times in these pages... and I have made mention of Joe being a pathological liar. Joe has a decades long history of prevarication.
The author of this op-ed would have us set aside Joe's abysmal debate performance because, according to the author, Joe delivered solid content. He did not. Plus, the author insists that we're supposed to accept Joe's poor performance (and untruths) instead of focusing on his age. We should not. It's not about Joe's age... it's about his mental and physical decline making him unfit for command.
You would rather choose Joe's age over Trump being Trump. That's OK. Would also choose someone who is unable to carry out the duties of the presidency due to mental and physical decline instead of someone who has already served in the Oval Office? If Joe cannot do the job and you reject Trump's bid for reelection, who would you like to see named as the DNC's nominee?
The author has tried unsuccessfully to steer everyone away from the obvious. The Daily Beast reported that when George Stephanopoulos was asked whether Joe should step down, George replied, “I don’t think he can serve four more years.”
TDS is a hell of a drug. This piece wins for the most detached from reality commentary on the debate. Good thing you retired as a speech and debate professor because if Joe Biden's performance was a good example for your students, they should ask for their tuition back.
I'm no great fan of Trump and he's certainly not a wordsmith or great orator, but he was nowhere near as bad as Biden, who could barely form a coherent sentence in that debate.
Honestly though the entire thing was dumbed down from what presidential debates used to be. I would have liked to have heard more policy and substance from both candidates. But this is what we are stuck with in this election.
You wrote, “… a good speech must be also judged by its content.” I would say the same applies to op-ed articles. IMO the content in your commentary is a political statement against the Republican challenger masquerading as an appraisal of the candidates’ debate performance last month.
You suggest we look beyond the president’s lackluster, poor performance, and instead look at what you believe are his “solid” arguments. Joe said there are a “thousand trillionaires” in our country, then corrected himself by saying “billionaires.” That’s OK. I’m hoping everyone can excuse such a misstatement… we all make such errors in our speech. But setting aside Joe’s pauses and blank stares… what of the content he presented at the debate?
He claimed his administration “beat Medicare.” I’m not sure what he meant by that claim. He also said his opponent wanted to eliminate Social Security. That is not true. Joe claimed no US troops have died during his term in office and that the Border Patrol has endorsed him. Both false claims. With respect to the border, Joe stated that there have been 40% fewer persons coming across the border illegally. While there was a reduced number of persons recently coming across the border after Joe made a policy change in an attempt to staunch the flood of persons pouring across the border during his presidency, this “solid” argument is at best only misleading. The Department of Homeland Security reports fewer border encounters occurred during Trump’s four-year presidency than just one year (2023) under Biden.
Joe made a horrific unforced error during the debate on the topic of abortion. While Joe acknowledged the death of a woman killed by an immigrant, he then minimized that tragedy by saying women are raped by in-laws, spouses and “brothers and sisters.” That is not a solid argument.
Joe also said that unemployment was at 15% when he entered the presidency. Again, not true. Let’s not forget he claimed earlier this year (twice) that he inherited 9% inflation from the Trump presidency. More false content. We can certainly break down the many exaggerations and false content presented by Trump during the debate, but that’s not the issue or takeaway for most Americans from last month’s debate. It is about Biden’s “performance and age.” It’s not about solid arguments and content lost in Joe’s delivery… they’re just not there.
Ms. Lowenthal, I’m not sure which debate you watched but it wasn’t the same as the one 50+ million people watched. Sure, there were speeches and rhetoric but Biden’s arguments were solid? Unless by solid, you mean Biden showed up and said something, anything. As for making sense, I think the people and many Democrats have now spoken. For instance, in addition to PeninsulaLawAndOrder’s recap, I’ll add the following:
Biden says he beat Medicare. An outright lie.
Biden saying the unemployment rate was 15 percent when he took office. An outright lie. It was closer to 6% (mostly due to COVID shutdowns)
Biden repeating the debunked Charlottesville hoax. An outright lie, debunked even by left-wing Snopes.
Biden repeating the debunked Atlantic story on military veterans. An outright lie by the Atlantic corroborated by nobody.
Have you stopped to think that perhaps the best defense for Biden’s incompetence as a leader and at the debate is Biden’s age? I’m sure you can find a CNN transcript and understand why Biden’s age is the focus instead of what Biden said because if Dem’s attempt to focus on what Biden said, that would be a greater liability. If you stop and think about what’s best for America, you’ll vote for Trump to Take America Back. If you can’t find it in your mind and heart to do this, write in a candidate.
Biden said we had an in law and sibling rape problem. We do? No US troops were killed during his tenure. False. At least he didn’t discuss his uncle eaten by humans. Or being arrested for protesting segregation.
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Ms. Lowenthal, are you going to ghost the on spot comments by Terrence, Dirk, Steve, Law and Order, and MichKosk or are you the typical democrat who visits the Democrat Fantasy Land and then ghosts the individuals who provide facts that counter your wishful thinking? And please tell me why a Jewish woman would support an anti-semite President Biden and not President Trump who recognized Jerusalem as the capital of Israel?
Agreed Dr. Lowenthal. There is no doubt Biden did a cringe worthy job at the the debate and the righties will have a field day pointing out all the errors. The irony is they will point out the lies of Biden while not mentioning the 30+ lies by Trump.
Based on substance, which should be the main focus of voting, Trump failed and was equally cringe worthy. Based on his hysteria, all ills are coming from the border and America is is the toilet. Listening to him berate our country based on his lies was maddening.
If he were to try for employment in any decent job in America, he would be declined outright based on his criminal record. Why then, should he be considered for the most important job in the land? I will take an old man over a conman any day.
Hello, Rel
I mentioned Trump's exaggerations and false content in my post. You are well aware that I have referred to Trump as a compulsive liar many times in these pages... and I have made mention of Joe being a pathological liar. Joe has a decades long history of prevarication.
The author of this op-ed would have us set aside Joe's abysmal debate performance because, according to the author, Joe delivered solid content. He did not. Plus, the author insists that we're supposed to accept Joe's poor performance (and untruths) instead of focusing on his age. We should not. It's not about Joe's age... it's about his mental and physical decline making him unfit for command.
You would rather choose Joe's age over Trump being Trump. That's OK. Would also choose someone who is unable to carry out the duties of the presidency due to mental and physical decline instead of someone who has already served in the Oval Office? If Joe cannot do the job and you reject Trump's bid for reelection, who would you like to see named as the DNC's nominee?
The author has tried unsuccessfully to steer everyone away from the obvious. The Daily Beast reported that when George Stephanopoulos was asked whether Joe should step down, George replied, “I don’t think he can serve four more years.”
That kinda says it all.
I've wondered... who are the 20% of people polled that thought Biden won the debate? Turns out they're PhD college professors. Unbelievable.
TDS is a hell of a drug. This piece wins for the most detached from reality commentary on the debate. Good thing you retired as a speech and debate professor because if Joe Biden's performance was a good example for your students, they should ask for their tuition back.
I'm no great fan of Trump and he's certainly not a wordsmith or great orator, but he was nowhere near as bad as Biden, who could barely form a coherent sentence in that debate.
Honestly though the entire thing was dumbed down from what presidential debates used to be. I would have liked to have heard more policy and substance from both candidates. But this is what we are stuck with in this election.
They must have really lowered the bar when USF hired her.
Good morning, Marla
You wrote, “… a good speech must be also judged by its content.” I would say the same applies to op-ed articles. IMO the content in your commentary is a political statement against the Republican challenger masquerading as an appraisal of the candidates’ debate performance last month.
You suggest we look beyond the president’s lackluster, poor performance, and instead look at what you believe are his “solid” arguments. Joe said there are a “thousand trillionaires” in our country, then corrected himself by saying “billionaires.” That’s OK. I’m hoping everyone can excuse such a misstatement… we all make such errors in our speech. But setting aside Joe’s pauses and blank stares… what of the content he presented at the debate?
He claimed his administration “beat Medicare.” I’m not sure what he meant by that claim. He also said his opponent wanted to eliminate Social Security. That is not true. Joe claimed no US troops have died during his term in office and that the Border Patrol has endorsed him. Both false claims. With respect to the border, Joe stated that there have been 40% fewer persons coming across the border illegally. While there was a reduced number of persons recently coming across the border after Joe made a policy change in an attempt to staunch the flood of persons pouring across the border during his presidency, this “solid” argument is at best only misleading. The Department of Homeland Security reports fewer border encounters occurred during Trump’s four-year presidency than just one year (2023) under Biden.
Joe made a horrific unforced error during the debate on the topic of abortion. While Joe acknowledged the death of a woman killed by an immigrant, he then minimized that tragedy by saying women are raped by in-laws, spouses and “brothers and sisters.” That is not a solid argument.
Joe also said that unemployment was at 15% when he entered the presidency. Again, not true. Let’s not forget he claimed earlier this year (twice) that he inherited 9% inflation from the Trump presidency. More false content. We can certainly break down the many exaggerations and false content presented by Trump during the debate, but that’s not the issue or takeaway for most Americans from last month’s debate. It is about Biden’s “performance and age.” It’s not about solid arguments and content lost in Joe’s delivery… they’re just not there.
Ms. Lowenthal, I’m not sure which debate you watched but it wasn’t the same as the one 50+ million people watched. Sure, there were speeches and rhetoric but Biden’s arguments were solid? Unless by solid, you mean Biden showed up and said something, anything. As for making sense, I think the people and many Democrats have now spoken. For instance, in addition to PeninsulaLawAndOrder’s recap, I’ll add the following:
Biden says he beat Medicare. An outright lie.
Biden saying the unemployment rate was 15 percent when he took office. An outright lie. It was closer to 6% (mostly due to COVID shutdowns)
Biden repeating the debunked Charlottesville hoax. An outright lie, debunked even by left-wing Snopes.
Biden repeating the debunked Atlantic story on military veterans. An outright lie by the Atlantic corroborated by nobody.
Have you stopped to think that perhaps the best defense for Biden’s incompetence as a leader and at the debate is Biden’s age? I’m sure you can find a CNN transcript and understand why Biden’s age is the focus instead of what Biden said because if Dem’s attempt to focus on what Biden said, that would be a greater liability. If you stop and think about what’s best for America, you’ll vote for Trump to Take America Back. If you can’t find it in your mind and heart to do this, write in a candidate.
Biden said we had an in law and sibling rape problem. We do? No US troops were killed during his tenure. False. At least he didn’t discuss his uncle eaten by humans. Or being arrested for protesting segregation.
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